At dusk,
The sun capsized reluctantly
Beneath a hill
That chased verdant shadows,
And where butterflies had
Flapped nervously
Like sailors escaping
A sinking ship.
I walked jauntily,
Whistling through leafy greens
And crunchy browns
In a night
That had become as purple
As plump grapes -
- Startling a maple tree
Whose branches
Were in mid-autumn
I watched it grow
Into a silent
Crimson blush
As if I’d stumbled upon it
While it swooned
Towards the spruce and pine.
... this makes me want to say "and then what happened?" Lovely visual effects and metaphor. A joy to simply - enjoy. Great work as I have come to expect. ~Pamela
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